Marshmallow bare bones

WALT: Create a bare bones story 

1.  Boy at campfire cooking marshmallows
2. Boy sees somthing 
3.  2 monsters walkup behind him in darkness
4.  Boy gets scared 
5.  Boy throws marshmallow 
6.  Monster yells and Baby monster yell 
7.  Boys sees monster is Gruffalo and baby Gruffalo
8.  The Gruffalos steal marshmallows 
9.  The Gruffalos run off
10.  Boy hears loud crack 
11.  Boy thinks they must of apparated  

Message in a bottle

WALT: USE CORRECT TENSE.

WALT: USE MORE EXCITING VOCAB.

WALT: HOOK THE READER IN AT THE START.

The Message In a Bottle.

The bottle lay there, waiting for someone to discover the ancient object.

The slimy frail glass had been bashed around in the sea before it had washed up on the rocky beach.

The bottle was keeping the secret safe waiting until the right person had come along, someone good enough to keep the secret the bottle was hiding.

The secret was written on old parchment with a fancy ink pen dating back to 1889.

Then one day at precisely 4.58pm a small girl no older than 6 came walking down the shoreline. This girl could keep a secret, she kept walking probably looking for shells until she found the bottle wedged between two slimy rocks. She picked up the bottle and kept walking far away away from the beach.

Personal Response for Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets.

HARRY POTTER AND THE CHAMBER OF SECRETS SUMMARY 

The book starts off with Harry locked in his room with his only relatives that he knows of, The Dursleys. Ron,Geogre and Fred Weasley (Some Friends) come and Rescue him in their dads flying car and take him to the Burrow (The weasleys home). When they get to the station their family go through the invisible barrier first to get onto 9 3/4 then Ron and Harry.When they run through the barrier the realised its blocked! THEY CANT GET THROUGH! Then the reaslise that their dads flying car is still is outside! 

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