Wednesday 27 August 2014

Marshmallow bare bones

WALT: Create a bare bones story 


  1.  Boy at campfire cooking marshmallows
  2. Boy sees somthing 
  3.  2 monsters walkup behind him in darkness
  4.  Boy gets scared 
  5.  Boy throws marshmallow 
  6.  Monster yells and Baby monster yell 
  7.  Boys sees monster is Gruffalo and baby Gruffalo
  8.  The Gruffalos steal marshmallows 
  9.  The Gruffalos run off
  10.  Boy hears loud crack 
  11.  Boy thinks they must of apparated  



2 comments:

  1. Hey Ella
    Your bare bone is very creative and inspiring
    I can't wait to see the real story on your blog
    From Bronah

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  2. Dear Ella
    That Bare bones Story Is AMAZING! you did a great job I Can't wait to read the full story
    From Sophie

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